Ki-o-rahi Tournament

 

  

Yesterday our class when to a torment and played ki o Rahi in toutoro and took a photo

Quality of water- reading to understand

In science, we have been learning to use subheadings, titles photographs/images, Diagrams and Lead sentences to find the key ideas in the text.

 

Jonahs Pride

  WALT use study the bible to gain an understanding that we all need  God's help, mercy, and love, and we are all called to forgive others.

 

The Bible records many stories about "forgiving". The Lord Jesus also taught us like this: when we forgive men when they sin against us, our heavenly father will also forgive us. However, it's hard to forgive from our hearts. With God’s help, you can forgive. 

 

Your assignment is to research "forgiving", in the bible and share what you learned. You will need to use reference material such as biblegateway.com or search engines to locate stories of forgiveness in the Bible.

 

Begin by brainstorming possible topics and bible references

 

Create your own framework to record bible references you will read, key events within it, and your thoughts. In week 8 you will use this to write what you learned from the bible about forgiveness. 

How did I go ⚫   ✅    ✅✅   ✅✅✅	My self-assessment
I can use reference material to locate starting points (bible stories) relevant to forgiveness	✅✅✅
I can create a framework to record my key ideas and notes	✅✅
I can read the bible independently	✅✅
I can use my notes to write about what I learned about forgiveness	✅✅
Teacher comment

figurative and Literal Language

 

 In class we read Thirst, our task was to make up our own ending to our story

I think I have done the following well because I used interesting words

Something I still need to work on is the 2A sentence

Dad shouted once more. His voice rumbled through the trees, scattering the birds that have been perched at the cans quenching their thirst. Ryder heard his voice. What shall I do? He wondered. Then he ran threw the dust with the hose, cleaning all his mess up so there were no evidence to be seen, in the corner of his eyes there was a shadow coming towards him but who’s. ‘’ Ryder!’’ his face palily and his eyes like a waterfall. He hid in his spot were he always hid when he was getting a hiding!. ‘’ Ryder you disgrace show your self’’ his voice-based like a gunshot. He was right on top of him. Terrified, Ryder shivered in the corner of his hideout.q

 

Snaping the wood of his underground entrance, dust impacting his eyes then a big hit smashed his arm emerging him from his hideout. ‘’Let me go!’’  he demanded, trying to run away. He took off Like a headless chicken zeg zagging through the crunchy field.  ‘’ Ryder! What were you thinking’’ dad yelled with veins popping out of his neck. Ryder's eyelids opened wider as his stomach sank, It just that we have nothing and i was just looking out for the family. ‘’ That sill unacceptable I could of lost my job because of your stupid act then we would of had nothing’’, ‘’ so take a quarter of the water back now !’’ but what about the rest of the water. ‘’ leave it for us the carter want know he grinded’’. Well emptying the quarter the water splashed out punching me in the gut, roling up the hose water pored down his legs like bald. The job was done  ‘’ Dad said this stay between me and you ok’’.

Entering the door Dad changed from nice to mad ‘’ why son just why. The more I look at you the more upset I come ’’ said mum. ‘’ He is going straight to his room’’. Days later no one found out and they went back to normal then the carters came over and the AQUA-PLEX drove up the 

driveway. Hello’’ said Mrs carter we come to give you some water. The operator climbed out of the transporter and walked round to the back. She tapped at the tablet in his hand. A hydraulic arm emerged from the transporter's side and field up their tank.  Tears rolled down their eyes, Thank you we all appreciate it.

Chicken?

Cort the rip

 I have been learning to use show not tell to make my narrative interesting

To do this I have tried to have to describe what the characters think and feel. This is a story I changed with my bro.

The Rip                                              

   

There were two brothers who were not at all alike; they were different in every way. The younger brother stayed on the sand and the older brother was always in the water. The older brother liked to swim with his bros, diving, tumbling, bombing, snorkeling, and surfing in the waves. During the day the older brother liked to go on lots of action adventures but the younger brother would stay safe on the sand. Sometimes the older brother would creep up on the

 younger brother and drag him into the water. “Oh come on you little chicken, it’s only waves,” teased the older brother.

One morning their mother got angry with them,“ like a cat and a mouse!” out you go together,’’ she said, and try to be nice to each other just for once’, Jack is out swimming bombing and having fun while James is playing on the sand. jack tells James to come out for a swim because it is hot. James looks at the waves and thinks there to big for him to handle. ‘’James get in to hear you little baby or I will drag you in’’ said Jack‘’James said no I will not leave this sandbank’’.Jack goes out too far then he gets caught in a rip and gets pulled out over 50 meters away from shore.

 

His brother waited for him to come back from the water. Fear gripped his heart tears tethering to burst from his eyes. Knowing his brother might not come back James jumps in the water to go follow jack, knowing there were jellyfish, stingrays, and sharks but he was determent to save or see where his brother is. As James was swimming out to jack, he saw a fin behind jack. James started to yell’’ shark! Shark! Behind you’’ swim to me, Jack said’’ you swim to me the current is too strong’’.OK! Then he swims to him and they swim together slow and steady knowing there was a shark behind them. They made it to the sandbank thanking James for saving him.

They ran through the sand, down the road, and through the door. When they reached home, their mom was washing the dishes.’’ Hello,’’ she said, ’’ you two seem very quiet.‘’ is everything alright?’’ Jack smiled at his brother. James smiled back.