Narrative guided writing

 

In class, I have been learning about narrative writing Name: KAYDEN                                      Guided writing                                                                                                        orientation   One day in The Moana Nui a kiwa on the island of Hawaiki there lived a muscular man called Kupe. He was a feisty warrior and explorer and no one dared to fight him because he was a killer. The island was small and the village was cramped. Lush tropical trees covered the island. Standing on the golden sand, with his taiaha firmly in his hand Kupe surveyed the Empty ocean. The ocean karangatia to Kupe.                                                                                     problem ‘’This island is too cramped, there isn’t enough space for us’’ Kupe said to Ngahue. ‘’Ae! Te wheke is eating all the kai,’’ crawled Ngahue. Te wheke was Muturangis hungry greedy enormous octopus.                                              Climax For weeks the warriors pursued Te wheke. The chase was hard. The rain                         pelleted  Down and the wind rocked Matawhaorua the back and forth like a swing. The warriors were starving and they were bubbling up with anger like a volcano getting ready to explode!                                           Solution Finally, Kupe came up with a solution ‘’Let's trap that cheeky Te wheke in a cave!’’ Later that evening Kupe threw the calabashes at Te wheke to distract him. He then pounced on Te wheke and smashed him between his eyes making blood splatter ever were.